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decided to not sleep and finish this... i need to print it out tomorrow so if there is anything you guys think i should fix let me know!

ok now i really have to sleep zZz zZz


photoshop cs/ wacom/ ?hrs/ no refs

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:iconmr-roi:
It's great... but all the broken windows look the same xD I would vary them a bit.

Also, the deep shadows within the buildings aren't so dark, add a bit more contrast in those areas. Also the light beams are kinda distracting the way they are... I would either get rid of them or make them stronger. Plus, if you want it to be a bit more dramatic, you should make it a but more monochrome and darken the shadows and lighter the illuminated areas.

It's good, though. Good job ^^
:icondinmoney:
thanks for the great crit man! very helpful!!!
does that look better???

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:iconmr-roi:
Mmhm, I think so. Still, you should get more opinions, cause not everyone agrees with my tastes ;D Looks awesome
:icontsukikamikat:
Hmm... at first glance it looks great :D ... maybe make some of those windows have more jagged breaks to them? And maybe leave a few panels of the glass unbroken? I dunno... lol I'm not an expert on backgrounds >_>;; Other than that though, it looks pretty good for no references! :D

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:iconflakattack:
Lol Fallout 3.

Also, it looks more like the city was bitten by Godzilla in varied areas more than it is just dilapidated.

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:iconfqtt:
hahaha it seems that all you do is draw and sleep! :thumbsup:

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:icondinmoney:
haha it probably was!

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:icondinmoney:
haha pretty much!

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:iconesco1984:
geof your backgrounds are getting alot better, keep it up!

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