Wicked man, you should send this to get published at some point. Wonderful toning here it looks really proffesional and expression work is sweet. I also am a huge fan of how there huts are similar to sea shells, its a wicked touch and adds some nice uniqueness to the manga. Looking forward to the next installment.
agree with suggestion to the first pic i would change his head position a bit and make him looking more down. that will rise the effect of the first three frames. and you can also better imagine the movement in those
he should have killed them instantly with some kunai and no one would even judge him "SIR! are you.." *kunai1.2.3. splash shwish ,slash*
i really love the "stare"-frame . perfect!
can i make a suggestion? in the first frame i would have turned him in a different direction than letting him face the entrance. he looks a bit too relaxxed and already focused on the guy coming in. the STARE-frame already gives us the the impression of him turning around to that guy.
cheers! when are you done with the whole comic btw are you planning to publish it?