i find your lack of periods disturbing. and it looks like genji is waving in the first panel's silhouette cause his pipe is almost blurred out of the picture and hard to see.
the 2nd panel also seems too gray, maybe the shadows behind the curtain can be darker? i dunno, i think the guy in the 2nd panel can be detailed more. i know he's not an important character, but everything else is rendered well and he looks so flat in his arms and vest.
I really love the work on the seashell buildings they awesome, I wouldn't cross the sword collector if I were you mate. Nice wrok on accenting that guys speech, I think the old mans outfit is fantastic and the detailing on his face with the last panel is really amazing. Love the whole only one eye open too. Sick work with the toning mate looking forward to more and I wonder why that guy is whispering to him =/ Hmmmmmmmm.