His eyes are like the guy in the center panels eyes, is that what the old man just noticed? Lovely toning and the close up facial shots are bloody fantastic really love them, espacially Genji's eyes helps me for my drawing I wonder how many half naked girls the old man has at his service? Filthy pervert Wonderful lightning effect on the central panel and the expressions in all of the panels are fantastic, fitting whats going on perfectly. Also that is some sweet dental work on the old man gives him alot of character
The middle panel featuring Old Lion is immense, I love the lightning-esque effect you put in there. Also, the closeup on the leader is so detailed just loving how you did that eye! Can't wait for pg 27!